the Solar system

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bq5F86AYHVIObcr_I9c4h2D91JgxWY_ubLfoyojbD0w/

Critiques would be welcome! We're still very, very new to this format.

CW at the link for mothers, food, anxiety, harassment, school, animal death

It's a sort of "Ugly Duckling" adaptation, thus the working title. this is only the first act (?). it's only going to be 15-20 pages total. currently got almost six pages typed, even though Google Docs says it's four; we're working in a different processor that auto-formats thing to look like a screenplay, which is helpful.

Again, any criticism is welcome!